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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Well I'm not sure what mood you want to give here, or what you want to show exactly but perhaps you should have something on the floor by where her head is and the wall. Something spilled or broken. That way, it adds something to that part of the picture but anything spilled or broken in pieces can trail across just a bit so that the eyes move around.
Get what I'm sayin?
Maybe throw some car keys too on the floor.
Hope it helps
it is absolutely mesmerizing.
although i think you shouldn't detail the background too much. the focus should be on the figure... it already is, but i think that detailing the background much further would subtract from it. i like the way you've hinted at an edge with just colour in the turquoise (on my monitor anyways) above her body. i think that type of technique would suit the b/g most if you were to do anything further with it. but other than that.. this image is just stunning. i'm in love with the reds.
side of her. saying something or smiling.
a boy maybe, or a girl.
i like it unfinished because it leaves a ot to the viewers imagination. scenarios, techniques they could 'finish' the piece with, questions in the viewers head, and i just think it creates a lot of visual interest as well.
whatever you decide, you've got an excellent start