Alright, so, I realize the quality on this piece is horrible ((It's a picture, not a scan.)) But a few of you wanted to see the final version, and I think this will be it. I didn't change that much around, but just enough so that it looks more finished to me although I still feel the bottom left corner is empty....I can always change that later : )
I really like how you extended the floorboards into the foreground a little...like how they intersect in the blanket the figure is laying on. I don't know, I just noticed that and liked it.
Once I realized she's laying on the floor the composition became SO much easier to read. Unfortunately if I hadn't realized that I think the composition would be very confusing...but the detail on the floor helps
I love the shading on her chin and lips....very bright and nice!
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"Going to war over religion is like having an argument over whose imaginary friend is better." --Richard Jeni.
*You're not really Gothic until you can speak Gothic.
Devious Comments
I was wondering, is it only colored pencils ? The gradients look so smooth ^^
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Domino effect
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Nothing is impossible; not if you can imagine it--Futurama
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Butterfly, butterfly float on by me <3
Closer and closer to me
Closer and Closer, damn this is gonna hurt...
- Closer, Cauterize
I love the person in the other room, I love how the shadow is faint but obviously present.
I love the shading on her chin and lips....very bright and nice!
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"Going to war over religion is like having an argument over whose imaginary friend is better."
--Richard Jeni.
*You're not really Gothic until you can speak Gothic.
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